作文—12—看图写话(3)

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作文：看图写话（3）

例题分析

看图写话类作文：就是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文。此类题的体裁较广泛，可

以是记叙文、说明文，也可以是议论文。备考上海中考时，需能够根据所提供的几幅图片写记叙文。 看图作文应做到以下几点： (1)认真读图，弄清大意：

读图时要充分理解图画所表达的内容，弄清图中的人物在干什么，弄清图画背景与人物之间的联系，弄清事情发生的经过。 (2) 理出要点，拟定提纲：

读图之后，要根据图画表达的主要内容，理出表达的要点。列出要点时要注意分清主次，不能看到图中有什么就认为什么要写。

看图作文时仅仅描述图画内容是不可取的，应充分展开想象, 使图画活起来。理出要点之后，就可以根据要点拟定提纲,即把整个图画中要表达的内容先用一句话写下来。 (3) 紧扣要点，扩写成文：

在列出要点后，依据已经写出来的话语扩写成一篇短文。扩写时，可运用想象适度发挥，紧扣图画的内容，进行适当叙述，连贯通顺即可。 (4) 通读短文，修正错误：

写好文章之后应通读全文进行检查。在检查时，应着重看短文是否扣住图画的内容，要点是否有遗漏。

同时，还要注意有无语法错误，如时态、人称等，是否符合文体特点、格式等等。

Writing (作文): 请根据图画写一篇关于汤姆(Tom)假期打工经历的短文。

要求：1. 词数在60词以上。

2. 把图中所示内容表达完整，条理清晰，意思连贯。 3. 开头部分已经给出，不计入总字数。 (注意：短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) ．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．【教学建议】：

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1. 根据写作要求，本文体裁是记叙文，人称是第三人称（He），时态是一般过去时。 2. 读懂每幅图片的事件，图片描述、寻找图片之间事件的联系（时间上、情节上）。 3. 加开头、结尾；句子表达优化：老师辅助做指导。不出现重复的句子、重复的意思 4. 检查、定稿：是否有拼写、语法错误。 序号 图片 图片描述 1 2 3 4 5 6

One day in the summer holiday, Tom noticed that a waiter was needed in a bar. He felt interested in the job and went for an interview. Tom was taken on and started working in the bar.

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中考写作-12 看图写话（3）

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________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________

________ (60 words) ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ (80 words) ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________

【参考范文】

One day in the summer holiday, Tom noticed that a waiter was needed in a bar. He felt interested in the job and went for an interview. Tom was taken on and started working in the bar.

A few days after Tom got the job, a young man came to the bar with his girlfriend. They ordered some drinks and talked happily at the table. They stayed for a long time and enjoyed themselves. After the bar was closed, Tom began to do the cleaning. Suddenly he found a wallet under the table at which the man and his girlfriend had sat. He opened it and found, to his surprise, lots of money. Tom telephoned the police and told them about it. The young man and the woman were found and they came back to the bar. They were very thankful to Tom, who was also very happy because he had helped others.

课后作业

Writing (作文):

为了迎接父亲节的到来，《21世纪报》（21*Century）正在开展有关“父子（女）亲情”的征文活动。假如你叫周泰（Zhou Tai），下列几幅图片描述的是你和父亲之间发生的一件往事，请你根据图片

及所给文字信息，展开合理想象，写一篇短文，并谈谈你现在对此事的感想。 要求：1. 语句通顺，行文连贯，书写整洁； 2. 字数不少于60；

3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：net bar, think of, feel sorry

(注意：短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) ．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．

Father's Day is coming. I'm going to tell a story between my father and me. One day ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ (60 words)

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中考写作-12 看图写话（3）

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________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________

________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ (80 words) ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________

Zhou Tai

【参考范文】

Father's Day is coming. I'm going to tell a story between my father and me. One day, I wanted to go to the net bar. But how would I go there without money? Suddenly I came up with an idea. I went to Father for 50 yuan. I told him that I was going to buy some books. He quickly took out the money and told me to study hard with a big smile in his face. As soon as I got the money, I ran to the net bar and spent all the money on the computer games. I felt regretted when I ran out of the net bar. Whenever I think of it, I feel sorry for my dishonest behaviour and make up my mind to never let him down.

初三英语春季班课程

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